The girl on the other hand, unaware of the emotions of this boy, gets a little confused when they start communicating. This confusion makes her remain indifferent toward the guy. The guy leaves no stone unturned in winning her heart. He could read her mind silently and then aloud. The girl feels good on getting a thought that the guy 'understands'!
"Sweetheart,
I never knew the meaning of love,
Then you came along and showed me 'True Love'.
You gave purpose to my life; which I was struggling to find.
If you let me, I would like to spend the rest of my life trying to make you happy.
Love you more than ever.. and I promise.. it will be forever!"
Then finally he proposes her for marriage. The girl is overwhelmed. This time she feels that she had been doubting this guy unnecessarily. She accepts the proposal. She now gets lost in her dreams that she had locked once as she felt that true love is rare.
14th February, St. Valentine's Day, is not far now. The girl thinks of giving a unique gift to the guy. She writes a poem for him.. she starts penning all her thoughts down on paper! This is what she writes..
She impatiently waits for the D-day now thinking how happy he would be after reading the poem written especially for him! She could visualize him waiting for her with his arms open; they having a candle-light dinner followed by a slow, romantic ball dance; whispering endearments to each other.
The next day the guy calls her up and says he is getting a feeling that their relationship won't last for long and if at all they get married, it won't work! The girl.. she is shattered. She asks him about the reason and then reminds him of his promises but he fails to convince her and asks her to move on. She was just like a perplexed child, with all the question marks on her face, staring at him trying to understand what went wrong only to get no justified answer. She thinks of the poem she wrote for him and all the moments spent together.. all his promises appear like unsolved puzzles to her.


20 comments:
The blog is unsolved puzzle for me!
But a nice read
You are a teacher so you'll obviously write well :P
I know I could have written all of them in one post :P
My first story! :P
Is the plot that convoluted?
Oye hoye writer!! :P
Interesting story, flow is good. Confused guy, poor girl, tragic end :( !!
Perfect situation showing how emotional fools can ruin life of someone who loved him/her.
Wish that girl was my GF!
Thanks!!!! :P
yeh cutu kaun hai? :O
I agree the end is still not the end!
hahahaha :D tu hai :P
what thanks? Khush mat ho.. that girl is not you! :P
:O
are we supposed to chat here? :P
nice summary, but it looks incomplete somehow, maybe because I also have no idea why suddenly the boy changed his mind :O
yea KJ.. the rest is left upto the reader's assumption! :P
Onion thanks was for the compliment! Don't think what you want to think! :P
Poem is cute
To other readers: She made that poem herself :P
hahahaha! Thanks again KJ! :P
@KJ : She is a poet from childhood :P
@duffu : I was just reading your mind :P
What a jerk!
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